Very chill, very smooth. But in my opinion, it needed to build up to something with a lead in it. Say fade out a couple of instruments like you did towards the end, then come in double forte with a quick pace lead. But I don't know, this song might be better with out it.
Hope this helps
Any advice given is accepted man. Thanks for your input and I'll try to capitalize on your advice for my next drop
The kid at the beginning was a bit creepy. But...
"mommy said that she be back where she at?"
"daddy why you crying it aint like you to do that"
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